NEW YEAR PRICES EXTENDED TO END OF JANUARY!

Special New Year rates to kick-start those writing resolutions - book my services now: pay by the end of FEBRUARY!
Also look at my Mentoring Scheme for those that are really serious about making it happen in 2012!
Believe and dreams really do come true!
It's not easy getting published, as both a writer and a publisher I see it from both sides of the fence!
However, especially for those of you just starting to send work out, and learning to deal with rejection, I can offer to critique your work at an affordable price.
Please feel me to email if you have something you think would benefit from critiquing but you need advice first. I love to hear from other writers.
Critique Service
Free Follow-up after alterations (follow-up fee starts March 2012)
New Year offers!
Novels!
First three chapters of a novel (not more than 6000 words *) and synopsis review with New Year Offer rate of only £30! (should be £50!)
Special price if you send me your chapters now or contact me before the end before the end of January 2012
* also contact me if more than 6000 words and I'll add just £5 per additional 1000 words!
£30
Add help with a cover letter, if for submission to an agent/publisher, for only £5 more! £35 not £60!
£35
Rough guide for novels (50,000 words plus) it starts at £100 and is priced at an additional £5 per 5000 words so average 100,000 word novel will cost £150 which includes synopsis review.
BUT IF YOU enquire NOW - before the end of December 2011 I will give an additional 10% discount on my already competitive rates so long as you send me your novel before the end of January 2011!
Email me your enquiry NOW: Debz
Short Stories!
Short stories up to 1200 words (Flash Fiction) usually £15 per story for annotated text and short editorial comments sheet... but now...
£15 £12
Or send me a bundle of flash... special offer for stories up to 1200 words bundle of 5 stories only £50!
£75 £50
Special price if you send me your bundle now or contact me now & agree to send to me before the end of January 2012
PRICE CUT! Short stories 1200 - 5000 words £35 NOW £25 per story for annotated text and full editorial comments sheet New Year Offer only!
£35 £25
Special price if you send me your story or contact me now & agree to send it to me before the end of January 2012
I also offer an additional 10% discount on 5 or more short stories sent as a bundle (1200 - 5000 words)... but for New Year Offer one time special offer 5 short stories for not £175 (full price), not £157.50 (with 10% bundle discount) but…now with NY Discount….wait for it… £115!!!!
Limited Time Only, contact me now and agree to send the stories before end of January 2012 and I'll honour the price! ***POPULAR CATEGORY!*** so do it now and I must insist stories are sent as a bundle and not over the year as the discount will not apply!
£115
Email me now and don't miss out on these exciting offers! If your New Year's Resolution is to make 2012 your year...then why not start here... now today.
Also check out the books I recommend here: Books
And see what my clients have said about my service: Why critique?
Also check out my mentoring service if you want me to work with you on a longer term basis and really kick-start your writing dreams... Mentoring
Anything else please email to discuss rates.
Debz
PAYMENT
I accept payment by cheque (email for details), BACS and PayPal using the email address writer@debzhobbs-wyatt.co.uk
When I receive payment using one of the buttons I will send a confirmation email and request you to email your story or you can email the work to me as soon as you've paid for the service indicating your PayPal reference number.
Use the email address above.
I aim to send the full report on short stories within 28 days, longer for novels and novellas and depending on current workload - but I will indicate in my response how quickly I anticipate getting back to you. If you have a deadline please indicate when you submit your story and I'll do my best to accomodate that.
Please send your story as an emailed word document attachment indicating the service you need and if you have already paid (include PayPal reference if you use a different email address for PayPal).
I will send your completed critique by email.
So what do you get for the price? I will annotate the text with suggested revisions (as I would editing for a Bridge House book) but I will also provide a full editorial comments sheet on narrative voice, plot, pace, characterisation, dialogue, overall comments. If needed I will also send useful sheets about formatting, story arcs, character arcs and so on.
Of course I can not guarantee your work will be published but I can certainly help to make it more publishable and offer advice on how best to place your work.
If you have any questions or concerns please email me first!